Revenge – A 100 Word Story

11 May





Doctors looked down at the young girl in her drugged sleep; her pillow wet with tears shed before the medicine took effect placing her in a coma.  Her face innocence even though she had lived a nightmare: she would sleep until her broken body and mind could heal.  Her attacker had taken her for self-indulgence and  pleasure.  Andrew “Stubby” Bodine’s type was always on the prowl; always taking from others; especially young girls.  He did see the angry mob coming in their flatboats. Mary Jane Ayres would heal while her abductor hangs from a Swamp Oak in Louisiana’s Atchafalaya Swamp. 







Ann Johnson-Murphree



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13 responses to “Revenge – A 100 Word Story

  1. Chris White

    May 11, 2016 at 2:37 pm

    A very powerful piece.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. quiall

    May 11, 2016 at 5:39 pm

    Chilling story! (I am sure you meant ‘mob’ instead of ‘mop’)

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  3. bowmanauthor

    May 11, 2016 at 6:58 pm

    Lovely covers and well done!

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  4. poetlou

    May 12, 2016 at 2:12 pm

    short , good and to the point

    Liked by 1 person

  5. luckyjc007

    May 13, 2016 at 2:26 am

    A very disturbing, but well written story.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. oldpoet56

    June 6, 2016 at 4:24 pm

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