Already Gone – A 100 Word Story

25 Jul



Already Gone…

Tom Thornton looked around the room; the fog holding his mind captive obscured his visions of today.  He was human, intellectual, yet unable to cope with the naked truth.  He expected perfection from his wife, tranquility, infinity of pleasure.  He walked into the bedroom where the scent of her lingered in the air, the fight had started when she told him that she was leaving; that mentally she was already gone!  He picked up the phone dialing 911, stared at the gun in his hand and turned to look at the thick red crawling across the floor from Sarah Thornton.







4 responses to “Already Gone – A 100 Word Story

  1. Chris White

    July 25, 2016 at 6:05 pm

    Hey, well told and with a neat twist. Excellent.

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  2. sedge808

    July 26, 2016 at 2:49 am


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  3. The Lunatic In My Head

    August 30, 2016 at 5:47 pm

    An incredible end! *Applauds the piece of writing*


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